Across the lea flows a river
transparent in colour.
It flows between a meadow
and the plains of rubber.
The river sparkles in gold
under the rays of sun,
with pieces of shimmer
floating in rhythm.
The pebbles and stones are round
and soft, and water is cool and clear;
sitting on the edge of meadow
she dips her feet into the river.
The river is calm and tender
like a morning dew,
a commensal view
that binds the beauty together..!
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I like this very much, being a lover of rivers myself. I hesitate to say this but matutinal = morning, thus tautology.
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I appreciate your concern, and would invite something better from your end in place of ‘matutinal’.
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You could use “early”, but it adds nothing to the sense. Why not just leave out “matutinal”
Try reading the lines aloud, and you will hear that it works perfectly without the extra word. I was taught to use fewer adjectives. I hope you didn’t mind my intervention.
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Thank you so much for your guidance. I would definitely look forward to what you have recommended. No, not at all did I mind your intervention. Rather I look forward to healthy and positive guidance and suggestions. Thank you once again for your precious advice.
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Beautiful mood you have created. I hope you will join us at http://dversepoets.wordpress.com
Maybe you have already as I see you have Viv’s comments.
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Thankyou so much. And yes i have already joined
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